Once day while sitting in the forest where they lived, her brother Hidimba smelled humans. She didn't like feasting on humans like her brother did but she knew that she had to go get them for her brother's dinner.
Walking into the forest, she saw a man. He was like nothing that she had ever seen before. He was beautiful and she knew immediately that she loved him. She wanted to approach him but was unable to move for a moment. She had never been in love before and she was confused by these feelings. She wanted to run to him and embrace him but she was too nervous to move.
Sensing that danger was not far behind, she knew that she had to make sure her new love wasn't going to be eaten by her brother. She could try to tell her brother how much she loved this man but it wouldn't make a difference. She knew that he would eat him nonetheless. He never really cared about her feelings anyways.
"Hello", she managed to say to the man. "My name is Hidimbi. I have to warn you of the danger that you are about to encounter. My brother is very hungry and he knows that you and your family are in this forest. I don't want anything to happen to you."
"I am Bhima and I will have you know that I fear no one. Let your brother try to find me and he will pay. I am not going to wake up my family just because of some rakshasa. They are tired and they are going to rest." the stranger replied.
Once she heard this mysterious man talk, she fell even more in love with him. He was so strong and so brave and she knew right then that he would be able to take her away from her horrible life. She wanted so badly to tell him right then that she was in love with him but she knew that it had to wait until he fought her brother. She had to make sure that he survived first and then she would confess to him.
She held back her emotions as she watched her new love fade into the distance as he went to search for her brother. She hoped he would come back. She needed him to come back. He just entered her life and she definitely wasn't ready for him to leave it just yet.
Hidimbi approaches Bhima in human form. Source: Wikimedia Commons |
Bibliography: Source. Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie (1913).
I see that you took a different turn with your story. Instead of adding your own twist, you stuck to the story line but narrated from a different perspective. I wonder how Hidimbi sees Bhima. Since her brother eats humans, does she see him as potential dinner also? From the story, she's deeply in love with him. Is that like being in love with steak? Just food for thought (no pun intended).
ReplyDeleteI love this story, so I like that you stuck very closely with the original story line. You did a good job of adding more detail and emotion from Hidimbi, and I think it made the story much more interesting. I love romance, so I definitely wanted to keep reading more! Keep up the good work!
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